It is often said that governments spent too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important ? Do you agree or disagree ?

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Many argue that governments allocate more budget for the protection of wildlife compared to the other relatively important issues. I strongly disagree with
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, as the efforts of the
government
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to prioritize problems
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as economics rather than
environment
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are highly evident in most countries.
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of all, the majority of states in the world face economic issues including poverty and unemployment.
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, the governments are allocating massive budgets to reduce poverty by introducing fiscal incentives and other initiatives
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of allocating funds for alternative energy research as an instance. In 2019, the Indonesian
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allocated more than 70% of its state budget for economic development, and less than 5% to protect endangered species and to fight deforestation.
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, with the fact that poverty will still occur for the
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few decades, the
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will most likely prioritize economic over
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environment
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the environment
.
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, many governments still view
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environment
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environmental
problems
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as deforestation and animal’s extinction as one of their least priorities and still have not allocated much money for them. These issues are deemed to be less likely affecting their citizens, and the society
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needs
food and other basic necessities from stable economy.
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, the Indonesian
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has never allocated much budget on deforestation, causing
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a massive haze
from forest burning occurring every year
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on
Sumatra island. For the
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few years at least, the
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might not shift their focus to
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environment
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the environment
. In conclusion, some layer of society argue that the
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spent too much money
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for
the protection of wildlife.
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, I have a different view as the policies taken by the governments have proven the
otherwise
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • safeguard
  • natural habitats
  • foster
  • cultural of conservation
  • long-term ecological sustainability
  • economic benefits
  • significant source of revenue
  • investment
  • nation’s economic wealth
  • preservation of ecosystems
  • clean water and air
  • prioritization
  • multi-faceted government budgets
  • environmental protection
  • wildlife conservation
  • neglecting
  • detrimental effects
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