the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

The chart below shows the proportion of people who ate five

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of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008 The diagram below illustrates the citizen's value who consumes five

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of fruit and vegetables a day around the UK

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the period between 2001 and 2008 Ordinarily, the number of citizens who ate five

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of veggies increased each year, leading to a significant rise in the UK and

decline

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gradually until 2006. Meanwhile, woman's consumption was hitting a peak as high as those for any other gender every year. In 2001, the ratio of

children

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ate

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5

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of veggies per day located at over 10%,

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men

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earned more than 15% and woman's proportion was highest at over 20%. In the

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3 years,

children

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and

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were stabilized

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the women grew sharply and earned over 25% in 2003

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2006, the percentage of

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, women,

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and men

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reached peaks of over 20%, 25%,

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and 30

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% respectively.

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, in the

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2 years, all the categories declined gradually except

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which

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in 2007. In 2008, the proportion of citizens decreased to over 20% for

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,

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25% for

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and 30% for women.