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Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by many that schools are responsible for teaching the necessary social skills. I completely agree with
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, at the young age, it is much easier to learn new concepts than later in life.
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, some students struggle with speech issues due to underlying health ailment and require that special care and attention is given to them at school. In
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, it could give a great opportunity to build a stronger base in public speaking or social skills. As working on these skills in schools, allow plenty of time to improve. In conclusion,
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