Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

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Dear
Mrs.
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Ankita, I am writing
this
letter in order to congratulate
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your retirement. Recently, I visited
school
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to collect my paintings from the art room, from there I got to know that you have already left. Actually, I wanted to invite you to
painting
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exhibition, which
being
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held on 27th Jan
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2020 in Central Convention Centre in Lucknow. I enjoyed drawing and painting, but
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was not confident about my work. You have always been so patient and helpful. Your dedication and devotion
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each every student was very much visible in each class.
Although
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sometimes students were low in energy, even
then
you made that session interesting with your enthusiasm and stories. I have never thought that one can do so creative with drawing and colours can. Once I left school I got busy with life and forgot about my painting, which cherished the most.
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, one day when I came across your article
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magazine and I realized, how much you encouraged me for drawing. Today, I have
finally
gathered all
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and going to display all my paintings in the exhibition.
Moreover
, I want you to be my guest of honour. I will
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if you will, to be attending
this
show. Kindly, confirm once you receive
this
letter
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so that
accordingly
I can send air tickets. Yours sincerely, Shreya
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