Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

#teacher #retirement #life

Dear

Mrs.

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Ankita, I am writing

this

letter in order to congratulate

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you on

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your retirement. Recently, I visited

school

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to collect my paintings from the art room, from there I got to know that you have already left. Actually, I wanted to invite you to

painting

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the painting

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exhibition, which

being

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held on 27th Jan

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2020 in Central Convention Centre in Lucknow. I enjoyed drawing and painting, but

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was not confident about my work. You have always been so patient and helpful. Your dedication and devotion

for

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each every student was very much visible in each class.

Although

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sometimes students were low in energy, even

then

you made that session interesting with your enthusiasm and stories. I have never thought that one can do so creative with drawing and colours can. Once I left school I got busy with life and forgot about my painting, which cherished the most.

However

, one day when I came across your article

school

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magazine and I realized, how much you encouraged me for drawing. Today, I have

finally

gathered all

courage

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and going to display all my paintings in the exhibition.

Moreover

, I want you to be my guest of honour. I will

grateful

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if you will, to be attending

this

show. Kindly, confirm once you receive

this

letter

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so that

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I can send air tickets. Yours sincerely, Shreya

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

225 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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