The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The graph illustrates the mean
temperatures
per month and the tables Use synonyms
shows
the average annual number of hours of sunshine for three cities (Correct subject-verb agreement
show
London
, New Use synonyms
York
, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Sydney
).
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and Sydney
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
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while
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London
and New Use synonyms
York
experienced similar changes in the average monthly Use synonyms
temperatures
, Use synonyms
Sydney
experienced Use synonyms
reverse
trend. Correct article usage
a reverse
Moreover
, from the table, it can be seen that Linking Words
while
the average yearly number of hours of sunshine in Linking Words
London
made up a minority, New Use synonyms
York
and Use synonyms
Sydney
had Use synonyms
similar
share.
In terms of Add an article
a similar
temperatures
, both New Use synonyms
York
and Use synonyms
London
start the year with low Use synonyms
temperature
(approximately 4.9 and 9.8 respectively). Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
However
, in these cities, the Linking Words
temperatures
gradually increase, reaching the peak in July (30 in New Use synonyms
York
and 24 in Use synonyms
London
), but Use synonyms
then
slowly Linking Words
decrease
, reaching the lowest Wrong verb form
decreasing
temperatures
in December (5 in New Use synonyms
York
and 10 in Use synonyms
London
). Use synonyms
By contrast
, Linking Words
Sydney
had the reverse trend, starting with 25 in January, reaching its lowest temperature in July (15) and gradually rising over the rest months.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
London
had the lowest annual hours of sunshine (1180), Use synonyms
while
the figures for New Linking Words
York
and Use synonyms
Sydney
show Use synonyms
the
similar pattern (2535 and 2473 Correct article usage
a
accordingly
).Linking Words
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