Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that
TV
is a very efficient teacher. However
, I disagree that children
should be motivated to watch TV
both at home and at school. I shall put forth my arguments to support my views in the following paragraphs. There is no doubt that TV
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children
. There are some things which can be very easily taught by visual illustrations. Even boring subjects like history can be made interesting with the help of TV
. However
, if TV
is to be used as an educational tool then
very strict monitoring would be needed as to what children
watch on TV
. All those talk shows and soap operas we can see every day are a complete waste of time and can even have negative effects by distracting children
from their studies. Moreover
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channel directors would abandon their profits and change talk shows to lectures and video lessons. Furthermore
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then
their interaction with the teacher would be limited. Teachers teach a lot of things apart from academics. They can come down to the level of the student and can also
stimulate children
to learn. What is more, children
would read less when they learn everything from TV
. Reading is an active activity as compared to TV
which is a passive activity. So, it would be detrimental to the holistic development of children
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although
TV
is a very good educational medium, it should be used within limits and whatever children
learn from TV
should also
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
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- however
- although
- even though
- despite