These days people in some countries are living in a “throw-away” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. Causes and problems.

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Individuals nowadays are inhabiting a new ideology of buying new things,

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throwing them away after some period of usage.

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is having an adverse effect on our environment. There are various reasons for

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cause and is causing various problems. With the rise of the world economy, average per-capita income has

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increased, leaving individual with more money.

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caused some people to make a habit of throwing away things after some use.

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Moreover there

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Moreover, there

are a number of different varieties of products available.

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caused humans to have a lust for using different product of different manufacturers.

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to the advancement of technology the companies launch new products in the shortest time-period, which makes people feel that their product is old,

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forcing them mentally to buy new products.

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, Mobile phone manufacturer Xiaomi Redmi launches new mobile phone every month, of which people having a desire to always have a new model of Smartphone buys a new phone every month.

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However, this

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false desire has caused big troubles, like environmental problems.

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Firstly companies

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Firstly, companies

have to manufacture new products in great quantity due to great demand, which causes exploitation of Natural resources.

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, the discarded products or the used products need to be disposed off, which is quite impossible due to the large amount. Sometimes the used products which are mostly made out of plastic do not get recycled or disposed off and end up in polluting our mother Earth. It

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wastes money, which

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could be used for good purpose.

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is a major problem on which no-one pays attention, but it needs to be considered.

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Otherwise it

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Otherwise, it

will cause major problems to humanity in the long run.

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