The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.
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The line graph displays the
stock
values of four different high-tech corporations from 2011 to 2016.
Overall
, Facebook’s value steadily increased,
while
Yahoo’s decreased. Apple’s
stock
price fluctuated wildly throughout the
period
and Google’s stayed relatively unchanged. Facebook started the
period
with a
stock
market valuation of approximately 7,500 and
this
consistently moved up in value
year
on
year
to reach a peak of around 20,000 in 2016. Yahoo began the recorded
period
with a very similar value to Facebook, but
in contrast
, its
stock
devalued every
year
, until it reached a low of about 2,500 in 2016. Apple
stock
was valued at just under 5,000 in 2011 and
this
jumped dramatically to nearly 35,000 the following
year
, before plummeting to around 7,000 in 2013. It recovered slightly in 2014 to around 12,000 and
subsequently
fell to a price of just over 5,000 in 2016. Google’s shares remained at around 1,000 for the entire
period
.
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