The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate the planned changes for the
centre
of the town of Islip.
Overall
, it is clear from maps the huge change will be build
a roadway around the Change the verb form
be building
centre
. Moreover
, there will be other developments in housing and shops.
The current map of Islip, the town centre
only consists of the main road
that runs stretches from east to west. While
the second
map shows Correct article usage
the proposed
proposed
to change Replace the word
proposal
the
main roadway to Change preposition
of the
pedestrian
Correct article usage
a pedestrian
road
and be
built Unnecessary verb
apply
dual
carriageway Correct article usage
a dual
road
around the centre
.
Currently, the shops to
the north and to the south of the main Add a missing verb
are to
road
. However
, the shops on the north side will be cancelled and Demolition it
to make space to build the car park, bus station, new housing area, and shopping Correct pronoun usage
apply
centre
. As for the southern area of the main roadway, the size of the park will shrink in the new Islip centre
, where new housing will be built within the ring street.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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