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some people think paying tax is only their duty while other believe that we have more responsibilites towards our society , discuss both and give your opinion

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tax
is
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are
 enough to hold their
responsibilites
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
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whilst
 other think lend hand by hand support contributing moral and ethical values. In
this
 essay we are exploring both and give our opinion
one
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One
 of the sides sharing
financial burdan
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the financial burden
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financial burdens
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form
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the
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The
 population pay immense amount of money in
form
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the form
 of
tax
 except nothing should be done by people with the sole responsibilities of the administration only.
for
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For
 instance, in Canada the authorities take care of
destitute people amount
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the destitute people amount
 collected in
form
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the form
 of
tax
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 should take tempt steps to build a jubilant society
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