The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

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Task 1 (

Process

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) The figures illustrate how energy

produced

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is produced

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from coal and

also

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there are some stages to express

this

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process

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by that

pictires

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pictures

picture

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from putting the coal with oxygen in

furnace

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a furnace

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to ready

flue

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gases

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. The first step ish that the coal is put with oxygen in

special

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a special

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firnace

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furnace

finance

, and

then

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taken raw

syngas

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. After that ,

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apply

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remove ( CO 2 ) mercury sulfur .

Subsequently

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apply

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remove purified

syngas

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from raw

syngas

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. In order to , once the coal

sended

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sent

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slag

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the slag

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part , the purified

syngas

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is delivered gas turbine plus generator .

The following step is

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that

this

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item

brought

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is brought

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electricity

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the electricity

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part . After that ,

gone

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went

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steam

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turbine and

generation

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generator

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, heat recovery

steam

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generation technology

is produce

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produces

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flue

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gases

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via special hot exhaust

gases

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Steam

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turbine and generation

also

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aid to

process

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perfectly for to take

flue

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gases

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. especially

that is

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out

steam

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for heat recovery

generayor

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generator

generators

. After

finish

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finishing

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the intire

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intire

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entire

process

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, be ready

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flue

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for flue

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gases

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to use .

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, flue, gases, syngas, steam with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

180 words

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