You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? You should write at least 254 words.
In
this
modern era, it seems to be fashionable of eating foods that are shipped from other countries. Some people having
a Suggestion
have
mind set
of showing their wealth by consuming the foods that are imported. And some others think that a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations
mindset
intaking
local act of bringing about a desired result
inducing
enticing
food
is more environmental and economical. I would like to extend my views about the advantages of the local food
over the shipped foods
.
Nowadays, items that are produced by the developed countries are mostly imported benefit
goods
by
the developing and under developing countries. Suggestion
from
People
belonging to these countries get attracted towards those products. One among these is the Suggestion
A people
food
items. The eatables such
as vegetables, fruits, canned drinks, packaged food
are shipped by
other countries. To preserve these items they are adding many additives and preservatives which may cause health issues among people. But people are not bothering about these consequences because they got addicted to these Suggestion
from
food
materials especially youngsters and children. I would like to share an example regarding this
case. My neighborhood
family always prefers to eat the packaged foods and tinned soft drinks. After a certain period, their son of age 15 was a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
suffered
from stomach cancer. Doctors reported that the reason behind Suggestion
suffering
this
is prolonged consuming of packed
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the packed food
food
. So taking
of Suggestion
the taking
shipped
foods are not good for health.
In recent days, Suggestion
shipping
ships
atleast
some people have the awareness about these kind of products and they are neglecting to purchase those Suggestion
at least
food
products. They are preferring
to buy the items that are produced and manufactured locally. Because, in these items they are not adding any preservatives and if Suggestion
prefer
that
the case only less quantity of preservatives are included which will not affect the health. Suggestion
that's
Also
, the fruits and vegetables that are grown here are sent to the market immediately for sale and there is no necessity to add any chemicals to keep them fresh. So the people knew that the foods that are produced in their home town are organic and more healthy
compared to those shipped foods. These foods can be consumed by people of any age. From these organic Suggestion
healthier
food
we can obtain the nutritional values as Suggestion
foods
such
and there is no harm to take these king
of foods.
In my conclusion, I want to make clear that consuming Suggestion
these kings
food
that are produced locally have more nutritional values and it provides people to lead a healthy life which is more important and it is the main advantage which outweigh the disadvantages of the shipped food
items.Submitted by rsuganthi08 on
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