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Discuss the reasons of environmental changes and improvements that have been taken to improve the situation.

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Environmental changes is a
changes
Suggestion
change
 of the environment caused by human influences.
This
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 essay will investigate environmental changes and will give some improvements that may help to relieve from environmental changes.
To begin
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 with, climate Change is the change is the weather as
will
come up, as of a liquid
well
 as one of the Environmental changes that can cause by many different
type
Suggestion
types
 of human action like cutting down trees and farming livestock.
This
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 causes in climate change can
effects
Suggestion
affect
affects
 the environment by increasing the sea level.
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However there
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However, there
 are many
adjustment
Suggestion
adjustments
 that have been taken in order to reduce the causes of climate Change like
regulations
Suggestion
Regulations
 and recycling.
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, global warming it is interesting of temperature in the earth Which results from carbon dioxide (CO2) and other air pollutants and greenhouse gases.
This
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 causes in global warming can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 the environment in harmful way the same as any other environmental changes in Rising sea levels and warming oceans.

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