You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter •Correct the information in the article •Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information •Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.
Dear sir:
This
letter is to inform you about the publication of wrong information in your magazine about my city which organized the international football game last
week and I am writing to elaborate.
Firstly
,You have mentioned the violence and drinking alcohol during the match,therefore
,in my city drinking alcoholic beverages Is forbidden due to
the Islamic religion and we have strict Rules for these things.Secondly
, violence in matching and sports normally happens because of the competition between the fans, so what happened was verbal
not physical.
Add the comma(s)
verbal,
This
incorrect information has had a negative impact on my hometown by declining its reputation.Additionally
, people believe whatever read an international magazine like yours even if it’s true or false.
I propose that you to
re-publish a new article to correct any information and I could help you if you want to write an article about my city and provide you with the correct document.
looking forward to promoting action.
Faithfully yours.
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Task Achievement
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Writing Tone
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Logical Structure
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Greeting & Closing
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Single Idea per Paragraph
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Contractions
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In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.
In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.
Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.