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Today Inceasingly, more people have freedom to work or live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this system outweigh disadvantages.

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Nowadays, illegal acts among youngsters has increased substantially in many territories.There must be several reasons and solutions for
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 as social media and the paucity of parental control that I think it can be solved with supervision of parents and holding counselling sessions. On the one hand
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social media is playing a vital role in today's modern life
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thus
 making it more challenging for fathers and mothers to manage their children
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because they can see a lot of
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 which can make them do undesired things
such
 as delinquency.
For instance
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there was a teenager that held up a gathering
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 their house through online social media, which it ended up for him to be arrested
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because of drugs that other members of the gathering brought with them to use throughout the party
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On the other hand
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there are solutions to deal with
this
 problem that made many of people exhausted.One of which could be more supervision of parents, especially on social media by means of enrolling their children to sports activities and other helpful activities which can make them busy.
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holding counselling sessions
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 To sum up
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parents or guardians should be more aware of what their children do so that in case of troubles they can manage the situation and help them out
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Under these circumstances teenagers could be more knowledgeable about their precious life
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