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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

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Students who prefer studying abroad are increasing rapidly, But Do you think that the cons of studying overseas are greater than the pros? I think Everyone should look at the positive sides and the negative sides and
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 he can decide what is better for him. I personally prefer studying in a foreign country. On one hand, some believe that the benefits of studying abroad are worthy as students have the chance to complete their studies and obtain a higher degree from a prestigious university.
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, students can study in Oxford university and
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 they will have the best tutors in the world
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, they will gain massive knowledge.
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, Qualifications from accredited college will make it easy for graduates to
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, students can suffer from loneliness and homesickness. Some students can't accommodate with different cultures. Some students can’t be familiar with other countries' customs and traditions.
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, studying outside the country is very expensive. You have to pay for the flight and accommodation .s
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can say that studying overseas is the best choice if you are planning well for your future and your career.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cross-cultural understanding
  • Specialized courses
  • Personal growth
  • Financial strain
  • Tuition
  • Cultural differences
  • Isolation
  • Homesickness
  • Educational systems
  • Academic performance
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