People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why or why not? Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are a lot of gifts which people accept during life
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but not all of them are unforgettable.From some people's perspective the
present which
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present, which
special given
for
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to
someone is memorable.Meanwhile
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other people opposed
this
viewpoint.They think all gifts are equal for everyone.
Perspectively
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Prospectively
, I
am agree
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agree
with people whose opinion is for special gifts side.Below I will explain my view with instances.
Initially
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the
gift
which person took especially for own will be unforgettable among other ordinary presents.As a reason
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maybe someone
prepaired
made ready or fit or suitable beforehand
prepared
repaired
prepare
it is by hands or bought
this
gift
for takers taste.It
is not vary
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doesn't vary
does not vary
what is
this
present.But importance is that
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,
the
gift
will be appropriate for
recipient
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the recipient
.So all presents which special for someone
are
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is
usually in
this
category.
For example
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If a boy picked flowers by himself for
girlfriend
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a girlfriend
.I think
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it is more valuable
for
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to
her than he bought from
flowers
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flower
shop.Because
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it was special for her. Following
this
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in our usual life we received a lot of ordinary gifts but
differently
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differentiates
differentiate
the
present which
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present, which
we took special is more pleasant for us.In my life
this
situation was
happened
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happening
also
.One of my
birthdays all
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birthdays, all
of my relatives and friends gave me presents.But among them
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the
gift
from my mother become more memorable.Because
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she gave me a souvenir which prepared by herself.It was so amazing souvenir which completed with my childhood photos.I never cannot forget
this
souvenir. In conclusion
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the
present which
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present, which
people receive special for them more memorable than other ones.All of my reasons and examples are evidence of my
viewpiont
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
.
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