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Psychological illness may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illness, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society , however , is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illness or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly, mental disorders occur rarely compared to physical disorders. It has been observed that psychologically challenged people are less likely to be accepted by the public and physical disabilities are treated with more empathy than mental
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. I completely agree with
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 essay. Scientific research shows that a few psychological disorders manifest at the later stage of life.
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, sometimes a person with a family history of mental
illness
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 or a traumatic experience is usually the one who becomes the victim of these types of
illness
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 these diseases are rare, the
society
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 does not accept them because patients behave unreasonably in
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 cases.
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, people who suffer from split personality disorder often display different characters at the same time in unpredictable ways. In
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 situations, it is difficult to control them by regulating their
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
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,
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 is disrespectful to these people.
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, patients who have
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a physiological illness
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 are accepted by the
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 because these diseases can be cured by medications or therapies. The predominant factor is that they can communicate with patients as they are mentally
stable whereas
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stable, whereas
 the connection cannot be established with mentally-ill patients.
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, many families abandon mentally unstable people. To recapitulate, any
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 related to
health whether
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health, whether
 physical or psychological are harmful and they should be treated with medication and family support.
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, the
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 only shows concern for physically ill people as mentally ill patients are difficult to deal with and behave unpredictably.
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