The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

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With the
internet
entering our lives, many changes have occurred in recent years.
However
, It is true that
internet
technology
effects
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affects
modern
life both
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life, both
well and badly in many aspects. I strongly believe the pros far
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
outweighs
the cons.
First
of all, it is an
indusputable
not open to question; obviously true
indisputable
fact that the
internet
has revolutionized us by allowing us to communicate in many areas. People could make use of
internet
for talking with an online
video
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video, although
although
they have long distance. Social media sites like MSN Messenger,
instagram
,
facebook
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Facebook
and
twitter
a series of chirps
Twitter
are ideal places to keep in touch with friends or family from all walks of life.
Further
, It is inevitable to access easily most information on the
internet
.
In addition
to online libraries, information flows are easier extremely thanks to academic research sites.
For instance
, scientists from all over the world publish their Master or PhD
dissertations articles
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dissertations, articles
as well as books on sites
such
as Google Scholar, Science Direct and Pubmed, enabling
reseachers
a scientist who devotes himself to doing research
researchers
in other countries to use
this
information. Using of
internet
result in
also
negative influences. The social life of network citizens is incredibly affected. They spend too much time on
internet
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the internet
instead
of talking to each other, which makes it difficult to focus real-world and lose their abilities to communicate with other persons.
Besides
, There are websites with abuse of the
internet
.
For example
; they are a threatening factor for
children's
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child
psychology because they have violent or sexual contents. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that the skyrocketing change of
Internet
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the Internet
has brought more benefits than drawbacks.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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