The parents of your Australlan friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for himlher. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter • say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party •explain why you won't be able to attend the party •give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time.

Dear Rob Uncle, Hope you and your family members are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to say thank you for inviting me
at
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Chris
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Chris's
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surprise birthday
party
. First of all, I am immensely happy to know that you are arranging
this
party
on
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his 21st birthday.
Chris
will get a huge surprise on
this
day and I know how much
Chris
loves his parents.
This
is absolutely
agood
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a good
decision and I highly appreciate it. Actually, I am sorry to say that I have
mid-term
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exam which is scheduled
from
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3rd week of July
,
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2024.
This
exam is really important for
final
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term diploma course.
Therefore
, It will not be possible for me to attend the
party
.
However
, my wishes will be with him and definitely I will see later his all photos and videos of
party
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the party
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, but,I
will
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am
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going to
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miss it.
In addition
, I am planning
two
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a
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weeks
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two-week
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tour
for
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Australia in
the
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december
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December
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. I will have a short vacation at my institute.
Thus
, I can plan to meet
Chris
during that time.
Also
, I will be staying one week at your place which will give us plenty of opportunities to enjoy the time. See you soon and Take Care. With love, Steve,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that ideas within each paragraph are distinctly separated and logically flow from one to another to make your writing clearer.
task achievement
Avoid small grammatical errors and missing words to improve clarity and professionalism. For instance, correct 'I have mid-term exam' to 'I have a mid-term exam'.
greeting and closing
The letter begins and ends with appropriate greetings and sign-offs, creating a polite and friendly tone.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task, including why Chris will enjoy the party, why you can't attend, and the alternate plan to meet Chris.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph generally focuses on a single idea or subject, which aids readability.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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