A lot of old people are suffering from loneliness these days. They also lack physical fitness. What do you think are the reasons for this problem? Can you think of possible solutions?

Nowadays, many elders have to live alone because their children have to work or have their own family. It is undeniable that many older people suffer from

loneliness

and lack of

activity

that could help them to be healthier. From my point of view, there are many reasons for

this

problem

. But

this

problem

also

has many sensible solutions, described in the following paragraph.

First,

the main reason

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this

problem

is the lifestyle of the younger generation. They don't want to live in a big family and they are more likely

want

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to spend their time with friends or their own family.

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, some people still live with their elder parents. But they still don't have time for them because they have to work a ton.

On the contrary

, the

elder

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mostly quit their job and stay at home.

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, they have

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times

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to spend in a day.

Therefore

, they feel lonely.

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not just

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disadvantages to

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mental

health

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effect

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to

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physical

health

too. When the older people feel lonely, they feel priceless and don't want to do anything. These feelings and

activity

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lead to

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depression and some other

disease

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.

In Addition

, there are many creative solutions to solve

this

problem

. The easiest way from my perspective is petting some dog or cat. Thereby they will have

activity

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to do.

For example

,

walking

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they walk

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with their dogs and

playing

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with their cat.

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activity

will help them from

feel

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lonely and lead them

want

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to do something good for their

health

.

To conclude

, many elders suffer from

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loneliness

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not just effect to their mental

health

but

also

effect to their physical

health

. The significant reason

of

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this

problem

is they need someone to talk

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do a little

activity

with them. The best solution from my recommendation is petting a dog or a cat. They will help the

elder

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from

loneliness

and lack of physical

activity

. Though, it's just a pity thing. But, they will not feel lonely.