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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books . do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage.

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Nowadays, e-books become one of the choices for reading a
book
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. Because, the development of technology and publication. It is undeniable that many people choose to read e-books.
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 some people choose to read a
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book
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. From my point of view, I strongly agree that e-books have benefited more than the drawback. In our daily life we have to carry many things, If it's heavy it will destroy our physical health. A
paper
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book
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 could be that thing.
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Therefore it
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Therefore, it
 must be better if we can read a
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 everywhere and every time with our electronic devices,
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 as phone, tablet and laptop. Those are lighter than a
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book
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, the cost of e-books are cheaper than the cost of
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 books because they use less money to make it. E-books are more eco-friendly than
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 books we don't have to cut any tree to manufacture an e-
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.
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, we have to deforestation a lot to made books.
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, some people might love the smell of the
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.
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, many people are allergic of the dirt on the
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. A lot of people think that reading on the screen might destroy their eyesight. Though, many devices have very creative mode for the
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book worm
a person who pays more attention to formal rules and book learning than they merit
bookworm
 to choose to the best mode for their eyes. It depends on your device that it is created for reading a
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 or not. To conclude, e-books have very little disadvantage that we can deal with. The benefits of e-
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 are much more than the disadvantage.
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