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Money is important for happiness some people think it is not discuss both views

#money #happiness #people
Happiness
 is a state of
mind
Accept comma addition
mind, however
however
 there are two
predominantly
Suggestion
predominant
predominate
 contrasting views where a school of thought deems that availability of cash hand hold permanent significance for achieving pleasure while other emphasis that finance has no positive
realtion
(chemistry) a process in which one or more substances are changed into others
reaction
relation
relations
 with real
happiness
 that will be discussed in
this
 essay. To commence with the former view
money
 is important to buy
basic necessities
Suggestion
the basic necessities
 of
life
 and to rear oneself and their families.
Although
 having
money
 brings
happiness
 to a lot of people. Nowadays all
realtions
mutual dealings or connections or communications among persons or groups
relations
reactions
rations
 fed up on hard cash. Very often we see that
levish
the main organ of photosynthesis and transpiration in higher plants
leaves
 human
have
Suggestion
has
 more friends as compared to straitened
person
.
As a result
, some masses reckon that
money
 is vital for
happiness but
Accept comma addition
happiness, but
 I
m not agree
Suggestion
don't agree
am not agree
do not agree
have not agreed
 with
this
 view
However
,
on the other hand
 side, I
aslo
 nature that
money
 increases
happiness
 until about a certain level of earning, and after that our emotional well being doesn't increase with income. Close circle of friends, and family is
most important factor
Suggestion
the most important factor
 of
happiness
. It is completely wrong to argue that the richest
person
 is the happiest one. For an example a
person
 earning millions per month may not be satisfied with the work he does and a
person
on the other
hand earning
Accept comma addition
hand, earning
 less but enjoying the work he does may be more happier.
However
, many other
factor
Suggestion
factors
 play
significance
Suggestion
significant
 role in
happiness
Suggestion
the happiness
 of a
person
for instance
 a loving
nd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
 understanding parter in
life
plays
Suggestion
play
 a very crucial role in
life
Suggestion
the life
 of a man.
Freinds
Suggestion
Friends
 indeed are
also
 important
to
Suggestion
in
life
 to share and
buit
make by combining materials and parts
build
 memories of
life
. In conclusion,
money
 is not essential for
happiness
, which can be found through job satisfaction as well as family. If more individual strived in
life
 towards true
happiness
 rather than
money
, the word
be
Suggestion
is
 a better place.

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