you have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international calls. write a letter to the company, complaining about this giving your reasons asking for the bill to be changed

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Dear sir or Madam, I am writing with regards to the cell phone bill I received on January 26, 2020, which includes a sum of $300 for international call charges.

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is completely unjustified as I never made these calls. I have been a happy customer of Air-Voice for

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the past

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4 years and I have never faced any billing issues so far. But my recent bill includes charges for few unmade calls. At no time I

never

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ever

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used

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phone to make international calls. I have only made calls to

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a local

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company and once called

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office which is

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a national call. I have checked my call summary and there is no record of any international calls. I herewith attach my call up records for your reference. So, I kindly request you to recheck my bill and withdraw my charges. I

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ask you to confirm to me in writing that

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has been actioned, by sending me a copy of

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proposal to

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address.

Fri May 01 2020

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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you have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international calls. write a letter to the company, complaining about this giving your reasons asking for the bill to be changed

Structure your letter

Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.

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