Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apologise for the noise from my house on 15th May. I received your letter
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morning, and I am very sorry to hear that it caused a big disturbance for you and your family. I have had my friends and families
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that day at my place to celebrate my 30th birthday, which involved lots of excitement and enjoyment. There were about 15 people, and we
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had
music
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and dance party to make my birthday celebration more exciting.
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of
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, there was
loud
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noise which you have heard from my home. I am extremely sorry for what had happened. When I read your letter
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morning, I came to knew that your kids could not sleep because of the loud music coming out
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my house. Could you please give me an excuse for
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? I am really sorry. In
upcoming
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days, I will not repeat the same mistake. If there are any events in my place, I will organize
in
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them in
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a private party hall in order to maintain a
peace
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environment in our community. Sorry for the inconvenience. Yours sincerely, Sab
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