The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tabular chart and
pie-chart
illustrate the number of Correct your spelling
pie chart
visitors
to the Ashdown Museum
and the results of visitor satisfaction before and after refurbishment.
During the year before renovation
, the total number of Add an article
the renovation
visitors
to the museum
was 74,000 where the majority percentage of the people
were dissatisfied and one
in 10 was very dissatisfied. In the meantime, less than a third
of visitors
satisfied
, Add a missing verb
were satisfied
where
less than a fifth of Correct word choice
whereas
people
were highly satisfied. However
, one
in twenty of
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apply
visitors
had no review of this
museum
, which was the lowest of all categories.
During the year after replenishment, the total sum of visitors
had increased by about 18 thousand where the most figure of people
satisfied
and more than a Add a missing verb
were satisfied
third
of people
were more satisfied. After reopening, the rate of dissatisfaction and very dissatisfaction had
decreased drastically when a few numbers of Unnecessary verb
apply
people
about one
in twenty were dissatisfied. However
, one
in twenty people
had no comment about the museum
even if
after a restoration that remained constant before Correct word choice
apply
furnished
.Add a missing verb
being furnished
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