Some people think technology is now an invaluable study tool for young people. Others, however, believe that it is harmful to the studying process. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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technology
is not a good tool for education.
Firstly
, technology
can help young people to watch online lessons or lectures remotely. For example
, some universities have seminars which students can watch from their houses. These seminars are called e-learning seminars. As a results students
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have
a lot of time to study and do their exercises. Suggestion
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Also
, using the technology
someone has ability to find information for
different subjects. Suggestion
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For instance
, if a student studies ecomomics
and they have to write their thesis, they can look information on the internet. So, they have an easy access to a lot of materials.
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On the other hand
, technology
has some disadvantages like the danger of hackers. These days, there are some viruses which destroy files of
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result, people
technology
is too expensive, so it is very difficult for all people to have access to it. Suggestion
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For example
, there are many people who cannot have a computer. This
fact leads to the seperation
of social levels. In the state of lacking unity
separation
this
way all students have problems to do their lessons and to keep up with the technology
.
All things considered, there are advantages and disadvantages about technology
. I believe that technology
is a useful tool for all people because it helps them to improve their lives. Also
, we can do a lot of things with technology
and reduce the time we spend on them.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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