Some people think technology is now an invaluable study tool for young people. Others, however, believe that it is harmful to the studying process. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays most people use
technology
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for their
jobs
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job
or education.
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However there
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However, there
are some people who believe that
technology
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is not a good tool for education.
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,
technology
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can help young people to watch online lessons or lectures remotely.
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, some universities have seminars which students can watch from their houses. These seminars are called e-learning seminars. As a results
students
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student
have
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has
a lot of time to study and do their exercises.
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, using the
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someone has ability to find information
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about
different subjects.
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, if a student
studies ecomomics
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studies, economics
studies economics
studies economic
and they have to write their thesis, they can look information on the internet. So, they have an easy access to a lot of materials.
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,
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has some disadvantages like the danger of hackers. These days, there are some viruses which destroy files
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on
computers.
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result people
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result, people
risk to lose their files. Another disadvantage is that
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technology
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the technology
is too expensive, so it is very difficult for all people to have access to it.
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, there are many people who cannot have a computer.
This
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fact leads to the
seperation
the state of lacking unity
separation
of social levels. In
this
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way all students have problems to do their lessons and to keep up with the
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. All things considered, there are advantages and disadvantages about
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. I believe that
technology
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is a useful tool for all people because it helps them to improve their lives.
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, we can do a lot of things with
technology
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and reduce the time we spend on them.

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