Some people fail in school , but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case ? What is the most important thing to succeed in life? (TYPE 5 – TWO PART QUESTİONS )

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life, but
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might be their parents who
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misled
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some students fail at university
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when they gain the freedom for their own choices
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namely, when they became an adult
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they decide to work in a field that
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different from their
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meant or adapted for an occasion or use
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result, they
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eventually.
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80% of people earned their fortunes in areas which is they do not expertise
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With regards to the question of what is the most significant stuff to
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successful in life
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think that no matter what
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they must do the
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which they like
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Because ıf people have the vocation that they desire to be
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they will not only hesitate ın order to face with difficulties stemming from their
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as economic problems or working hard
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but they will
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never give up to try until they
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Thus, they
will gain the
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an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
eventually
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being satisfied with their
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brings happiness at the same time
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After decades of speculation
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today
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today's
sociologists truly have accurate information about the connection between
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succeeding
and happiness
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and they claim these are directly proportional
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being successful means being happy and
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this
plural of "this"
these
two things need to each other for being exist
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In conclusion
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success
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is related to do what people desire to do. If people decide to their
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by themselves
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they
wil be succeed
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will be succeeded
will be succeed
presumably more.
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the reason of why someone who
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can not
cannot
be
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attain success or reach a desired goal
succeed
sourced
in schools but
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have
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having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
successfully
in work life
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, Their
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will
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affect their happiness that will bring more
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic performance
  • aptitude
  • resilience
  • perseverance
  • networking
  • interpersonal skills
  • entrepreneurial
  • innovation
  • creativity
  • practical experience
  • real-world application
  • career advancement
  • drive
  • motivation
  • life-long learning
  • opportunities
  • non-traditional paths
  • adaptability
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