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Many people are choosing to live on their own. Is this a positive or a negative trend?What is your opinion and share your personal experiences? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the modern world, peoples are working outside from their city.
As a result
, they are living alone and so they are adapted to live their
life
 by their own. Well, it is not negative or positive. In my opinion, it is completely depends on the persons and their situations. Let's discuss in the essay.
Firstly
, Nowadays, the concept of joint family is vanishing from the society because of a number of reasons. One of them is, young people going to the employment in the other countries.
For example
, if a person is settling to abroad, prior they are going alone as the time passes, they started enjoying their
life
 without interference of anybody. Another example, students are going abroad for higher studies and start to enjoy their
life
, because their parents were not there with them for making the restrictions. As we all know, the generation Z is having lack of patience and short temper, so
this
 is the reason they avoid in
life
 with their family and enjoy their own company. On the flip side, Living separately is not good and it creates a negative impact on the coming generation. Due to
this
, the families triple bond will turn to single bonds, that can be easily broken. There is very famous quote 'Unity Is Strength', it means if we will stay together,
then
 it will strengthen the bond of our relationship. To conclude, mostly young generation feels to live by their own, reason being, they want to enjoy the
life
 like a king and want to be the only emperor of their own kingdom. But,
this
 is not good for the long term, because own
life
 and own rule will not unite the world together.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-reliance
  • personal growth
  • privacy
  • personal space
  • financial burden
  • cost-sharing
  • loneliness
  • isolation
  • flexibility
  • freedom
  • safety risks
  • elderly individuals
  • health issues
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