Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

In our modern life, one of the most important aspect is education. Every person learns something new according to age, experience and knowledge. Some people prefer self-study, but I think it is always better to have a teacher or guide to study.
First
of all, study with professional teachers at schools or educational centres, much more effective than learn by own selves. Because they have many years of experience and in accordance with
this
, teachers use an individual approach to each student in order to find and show their best sides.
For example
, if you cannot choose what university to enter or in what direction to move in the future, teachers will help you by weighing the pros and cons.
Se
cond important point i
Suggestion
The second important point
s emotional state. All teachers give advice to students not only in their education life, but
also
in person. They always support, help and motivate children with words like: ,
Ne
Accept space
,
ver give up'' ,
yo
Accept space
,
u can do it'' ,
y
Accept space
,
ou are the best one''. All students will inspired by
this
kind of words and buckle down to harder st
udeing.
To sum up, all our teachers which we met, play a major role in our lives and help to explain, check and fix our mistakes.
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