The chart illustrates estimated maximum population of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004
The bar chart provides information about the estimated maximum population of Asian
elephants
from 1997 to 2004.
Overall
, high rate of elephants
in India in both years when graph
hits a Correct article usage
the graph
low-point
in China. In 1997, Correct your spelling
low point
elephants
are more than the
in 2004 approximately 10000 Correct article usage
apply
species
in India. However
, in Malaysia's elephants
in 1997, 3000 species
, but this
dramatically decreased by one thirds
to 1000 Change to a singular noun
third
species
in 2004. Also
, in China
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,China
this
dropped by half, 1000
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from 1000
species
to 500. Other countries' elephants
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elephant's
elephants'
population
changed significantly. Fix the agreement mistake
populations
Elephants
in 1997 are much more than in 2004 all
countries. Some countries remained relatively unchanged. Vietnam in 2004 is the same in Laos around 1000 Change preposition
in all
species
. Estimated
maximum population of Add an article
The estimated
elephants
have some fluctuations in both years.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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