Some people believe that people who read books for pleasure can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is not doubt that there
are
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is
a variety of entertainments for people nowadays, some people think that reading books have helped bring positive changes than watching TV in aspects of imagination and language. I personally believe that reading books could bring about
lot
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a lot
of benefits for people
not just limit
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doesn't just limit
at developing more the skills of imagination and language.
Firstly
, the habit of reading can help people to foster patience which is very much become useful later in their life. Because when the encountering emergencies
such
as diseases or accidents, those people who is the patience could tackle these kinds of problems better comparatively.
Also
, it is admitted that a kid who has read
books persistently
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books, persistently
from earliest hours has indeed more vocabularies and fancy ideas than the peer who did not. Through reading books,
such
as the literature, the science and so on, kids are willing to focus on their energy into some chapters or questions that obsess themselves, meanwhile their brain is exercised.
On the other hand
, we should not ignore the positive effects of watching TV, which has its unique advantages --- visual and sound. For an infant or a little baby under 3, it is impossible that they are getting to
family
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the family
with
this
world through books.
For example
, a singing bird skims a blue river on a television screen, which attract baby’s attention tightly. The kid is prone to imitate the song and image what is the bird.
Therefore
, watching television is
also
an efficient approach to sharpen their essential skills. In conclusion, I think that
whether people to
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whether people
watch TV or read books, just finding the right way can bring beneficial results.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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