Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an opinion that people who work in entertainment receive too high salaries, and their impact on others is

unfavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

;

however

, the opponents say that these individuals should be paid large amounts since they bring benefits to society. Even though show-business stars sometimes do not

lead proper

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lead to proper

lifestyles, I believe that their talents make a huge difference

for

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in

to

the lives of ordinary people. On the one hand,

enetrtainers obtain

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entertainers, obtain

entertainers obtain

entertainer's obtain

excessive remuneration, which they allegedly spent on their unhealthy lifestyles. Not only do some drink alcohol, but some

also

consume drugs, and

this

can set a negative example for their fans.

For instance

, a few months ago, while being drunk, Lady Gaga gave an interview, which was watched by many teenagers who look up to

this

singer. From my perspective,

however

, media outlets often filter inappropriate content with entertainers;

therefore

, celebrities still deserve to receive high pay despite their occasional

misbehavior

improper or wicked or immoral behavior

misbehaviour

.

On the other hand

, people who work in music, cinematography, and art ought to be paid large sums of money because they brighten up others’ mood. If a person has a dull job and feels exhausted after a hard-working day, they can watch

they

of them or themselves

their

them

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

TV program, or listen to a beautiful song, which would make them happier;

thus

, entertainers who produce

such

media content are very beneficial for society. When my family is tired and stressed,

for example

, we listen to James Corden’s comedy shows, which enhance our mood significantly. So, I completely agree that show-business stars ought to be paid high salaries. In conclusion,

although

entertainers sometimes show a negative example to their followers by doing wrong things, I am of the opinion that they should be

highly

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higher

-paid since they carry out an important mission of helping ordinary people to have some fun.