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Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
 people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might
this
 be the case. What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed. These days an overwhelming majority of people choose to run their own
business
 rather than being employed by other
business
. I am of the opinion that strong desire to be wealthy and
also
 regular
business
 seminars encourage people to start their own
business
.
However
, they may face some difficulties in
future
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the future
.
There
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They're
Their
 some prominent reasons why people choose to run their own
business
.
Firstly
, in many modern societies entrepreneurship is greatly encouraged by a large number of
business
 seminars and workshops advertisements. These seminars and workshops not only provide individuals with any information which they need to set up their own
business
,
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,
but
also people are being
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people are also being
 told that they have no limit and can easily become as wealthy as a Steve Jobs is.
Moreover
,
individuals particularly
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individuals, particularly
 those who are willing to be a
business
 person and live in luxury are convinced that start their own
business
.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks associated with self-employment. The
first
 issue that self-employed may face is the necessity of being a jack of all trades specially if the company is very small and they have not enough money
.
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.
 They have to be an accountant, human resource manager and so forth at the same time. It is because they are not able to hire other people to do these tasks.
Furthermore
, they had to pay
tax
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taxes
 and provide their employees with decent working condition.
Moreover
, due to the fact that companies these days are facing fierce competition, many of them are not able to pay their own bills and debt and go bankrupt. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that being your own master has many downsides and
that is
 why many people decide to work
to
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for
with
 other companies or
business
.
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