Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Recently, the
internet
has advanced more than previous. The
internet
is available to connect the person who lives in all over the world and to get any data easily whatever you want. I agree that today's
teenager
is more stressful than previous generation's teenagers. The main reason why I agree with the opinion that a
teenager
is stressful than before who live in the
internet
society. The
teenager
lives in there and spending most of a day.
This
is because, the
internet
is increasing available to connect with people even you have never met or never heard a voice. If you could contact with the people and talk lots,
then
you may have likely an illusion as a reliable person. Sometimes, a convenience is helpful us and necessary to our lives, but
on the other hand
that might be likely to be lonely and stressful.
Therefore
, the relationship may not be longer or unsuitable.
Secondly
, to distinguish right or wrong information is arduous for
teenager
even for adults. In the
internet
society is spreading a
rumor
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumour
, exaggerated advertisements and word of mouth. The information is written by anonymous people that could be unreliable and easy to fix to someone. The processing enormous amount of information is suffering for them and have to care about
internet
fraud. Their fraud is a clever deception and unclear. In conclusion, I believe that nowadays
teenager
must be stressful in
this
internet
society than the previous generation. To recognize real or unreal world is difficult and obviously stressful to them.
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