Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone’s lives. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while other say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

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These days, we all are surrounded by electronic devices and
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we are subjected to advertisements. These ads are designed logically to target specific audiences and these have severe effects on our mental health and alters our psychology unknowingly. In
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essay, I will examine the effects of advertisements on human kind. On one hand, relevant ads are helpful as they show the product which is required. It is often the case that we try to purchase stuff online, but we are unable to find the right item and eventually we don't buy, while google monitors our search and shows us relevant ads which sometimes shows the product we needed.
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, I was looking for a hot wheel toy for my nephew but it was difficult to find the one he needed, suddenly a poster shows up and that's what exactly I wanted.
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, it provided me the way to get discounts on the same product.
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, advertisements are misleading and forces us to buy a specific merchandise.
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, we tend to buy items which are not essential and are just luxury brand, these are often highly priced. The constant advertisement makes us irritated, some ads don't have any relevance to our needs, they are just there because the people paid money to show the advertisement.
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, in my browser, I was shown sports advertisements which have no connection with me at all.
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, same ad was repeated multiple times on my laptop which made me feel exhausted and unhappy. In conclusion, advertisement is one of the main sources of income for digital platforms. So, they have no other way but to adapt to the industry. Advertisement lure people to buy unnecessary items and
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, it helps to find the right item. Advertisement have both demerits and merits, but I think it's disadvantage outweigh it's advantage.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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