You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter, offer to make a popular dish from your country describe what this dish is explain why it should be included in the event

Dear Luis, I am writing
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letter to let you that I am very excited to work with you for
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event. I really want you to add one of the renowned traditional dishes to the menu list. My whole team is contributing a lot of effort and time in order to make
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event more even and memorable.People will come from different regions and countries to explore unique things.
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, every individual shows more interest in knowing about their culture and beliefs.
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,
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dish is very well known in the locality which is known as 'Chole Bhature'.It basically includes grams, which is rich in protein. It takes two or three hours for the preparation.
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dish will gain international recognition through
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event.
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, serving them famous food items will
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create awareness about our cuisine too Yours sincerely, Raman

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task achievement
Consider adding more details about the ingredients or preparation process of 'Chole Bhature' to enhance the description.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. For example, you can separate the introduction, description of the dish, and importance of including it into distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
You might want to clarify your excitement about the event in a more specific way to strengthen your opening.
executive tone
You maintained a friendly and respectful tone throughout the letter, making it suitable for the context.
content
Your enthusiasm for the event and the dish is clearly conveyed, making your contribution feel valuable.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Contribution
  • Cuisine
  • Traditional
  • Ingredients
  • Preparation
  • Cultural significance
  • Celebrate
  • Diversity
  • Culinary traditions
  • National dish
  • Occasion
  • Unique attributes
  • Preparation method
  • Gourmet
  • Authentic
  • Flavorful
  • Recipe
  • Event arrangements
  • Showcase
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