Some people spend a lot of money for their wedding ceremonies. However, others feel like it is unnecessary to spend a lot. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

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Some people prefer to have a luxury wedding, in spite of spending a huge amount of
money
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. Others argue that it is unnecessary to spend the huge amount. I agree with
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view. In my opinion,
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of spending huge amounts, one can save it and utilize for better purposes. On the one hand, big weddings have some benefits.
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, it creates memories that the couples can remember during their lives. It is
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a chance for young people to celebrate their happiness with their friends and family.
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, many people spend too much
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on
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event to make it unforgettable and to show off their wealth.
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. They can invest it for
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, couples' life after marriage involves a lot of expenses.
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purchase a dream car or have a trip, it would be wise to spend less on the wedding event. To conclude, many people strongly argue that spending a lot of
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for marriage, bring happiness and status among the society. I personally think that
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