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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

#year #languages #people #life #world
With the development of
today
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today's
todays
world
, several languages seem to disappear;
however
, there are people who think that it does not matter as
the fewer
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the fewest
the few
 languages in the
world
, the easier life becomes. In
this
 essay, I will try to elaborate the issue as I disagree with the belief above.
First
 and foremost, a
language
 represents for a particular culture;
therefore
, should a
language
 disappear, the culture will probably be lost.
For instance
, many tales or historic stories belonging to a specific land or country, which are hardly translated into “global
language
” like English, will have to face the risk of being forgotten and gone forever. The
lost
give or make a list of; name individually; give the names of
list
lots
 of languages can
also
 affect the
culture
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cultural
 diversity as it makes our
world
 become
more colourlessly
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more callous
more callously
 than it used to be. To be more specific, when people visit a different-spoken-
language
 country, they will find out how interesting it can be when knowing something new and distinctive through that
language
.
Secondly
, there will be much
difficulties
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difficulty
 in universalizing a different
language
 in some countries. Particularly, teaching the majority how to use a
language
 which is no way alike their mother one is
such
 a big challenge as their mindset are for the mother
language
.
Furthermore
, changing a whole country’s
language
 into a completely new one requires a lot of time.
Therefore
, it will not be easier for the
world even
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world, even
 when there are fewer
language
. In conclusion, it is essential to care about all languages around the
world
 and everyone should take keeping them alive seriously.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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