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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

#overpopulation #centers #world
Overpopulation
 was
very important
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a very important problem
problem
 in
nowadays which
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nowadays, which
 affects the economy.
For example
, almost eight billion people in the world today. In
this
 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will discuss the main problems of
overpopulation
 and possible solutions of
this
problem
.
Overpopulation
 depends on base and level of economic development of the
territory of the
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population of the territory
population
.
For example
,
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,
 statistics show that small countries and countries with a small supply of resources have a
litle
limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent
little
population
. And actually another reason of
overpopulation
 was
economic situation
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the economic situation
 of the country and condition of people who is living in
this
 country.
For
example families
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example, families
 with a decent income
,
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,
 probably would have thought about whether to lose it
,
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,
 increasing the number of children. And the low level of education does not allow a realistic assessment of their needs and opportunities
,
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,
 as well as families-planning. In my opinion
,
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,
 the best solution to
this
problem
 was
limit
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limited
 politic
,
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,
 like in China. In
this
 country introduced
new rule
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new rules
a new rule
,
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,
 when
family
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a family
the family
need
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needs
 to pay
fine
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fines
 when they got
second
 children in
family
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the family
a family
. In conclusion
,
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,
overpopulation
 was
catastrophic
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a catastrophic problem
problem
 in our
every day
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
 life. Approximately
,
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,
 when
population
 of people will decrease for twenty five
billions
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billion
 people it would be total
overpopulation
 of humanity. Environmental pollution will exceed a critical level
,
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,
 which will lead to many problems
,
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,
as a result
 of which the
population
 will greatly decrease. And
this
 is the most likely path for the development of humanity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Migration
  • Sustainable development
  • Infrastructure
  • Population density
  • Urban sprawl
  • Urban planning
  • Renewable energy
  • Family planning
  • Rural economies
  • Public transport
  • Living standards
  • Healthcare access
  • Educational facilities
  • Employment opportunities
  • Regulations
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