Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

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a very important problem

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, almost eight billion people in the world today. In

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Overpopulation

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depends on base and level of economic development of the

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population of the territory

population

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statistics show that small countries and countries with a small supply of resources have a

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the economic situation

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country.

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example families

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increasing the number of children. And the low level of education does not allow a realistic assessment of their needs and opportunities

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like in China. In

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overpopulation

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in our

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when

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of people will decrease for twenty five

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of humanity. Environmental pollution will exceed a critical level

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which will lead to many problems

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of which the

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will greatly decrease. And

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is the most likely path for the development of humanity.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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