Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding the noise reported by you. Please accept my sincere apologies for

disturbance

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the disturbance

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caused to you. I am sorry about the noise. I have hosted a small gathering at my house since I have been elected as student union president.

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and my friends were happy about it and I feel in the course of

celebration

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the celebration

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we just crossed out limits a bit too much. I guarantee you that there wouldn't be any more

disturbance

caused to you and I will take appropriate action. I will not be hosting

large

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gathering

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in my residence and would see that the music is not played at all after 9 PM and even before 9 PM the volume would be pretty low so that there wouldn't be any

disturbance

to you. Thank you again for your understanding and I see that there wouldn't be any

further

disturbance

caused to you. Yours Sincerely, MK

Mon May 04 2020

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

157 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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