A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter • describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team • summarize the benefits of paying for the concerts • say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my appreciation in regard to your decision to sponsor a local junior sports
team
or alternatively arrange two
open-air concerts
.
Undoubtedly, sponsoring the local junior sports team
will be advantageous for both the team
and the business. What is important is that they will be fully equipped with all necessary training stuff, and it will enhance their chance to win competitions with a prize pool of up to 1 million dollars. Considering that your business will become more lucrative, your brand will also
be promoted simultaneously.
On the other hand
, arranging two
open-air concerts
will also
bring to people an
immense pleasure and some bands would Correct article usage
apply
also
get the chance to show their talents. It is extremely essential for our culture and legacy.
I am completely confident that either of your initiatives will be beneficial for our society. However
, I suppose that supporting the junior sports team
will have a permanent result than organizing two
open-air concerts
with temporary effects. Emotions after concerts
will be forgotten while the young sportsmen will become our pride at least for the next
two
years.
Once again thank you for an
excellent support.
Yours faithfully,
Kao MaoChange the word
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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