Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In
this
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modern world, it is argued by some politicians and authorities that the
art
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classes are crucial for students while others believe that those courses are loss of
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. I believe that
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classes have significant importance in many ways,
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as expanding imagination or being handled multi-tasking works, and
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essay will examine both arguments.
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of all, in many developed countries, the
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classes are a big part of the curriculum of the preliminary and high schools.
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, as per an academic article published by the EU says that It has been proven that each
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, but most importantly painting, helps children to enlarge their imagination which allows them to create innovative products or structures in future.
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, if a student’s
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imagination, skill
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has been increased up to 14 years old, he would be able to draw the futuristic buildings and might become one of the most popular architects.
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, multi-tasking
skill
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has been mentioned in almost every job applications’ requirements. People could not have
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skill
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after the 20s,
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,
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skill
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should be imposed on a person in her childhood times. In fact, in the same article which aforementioned above states that there is a solid relation between multi-handling and playing the piano. Whereas a child learns how to play the piano, he
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could gain a concrete
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to manage his brain in a different way, which allows him to do multiple tasks at the same
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in their professional life.
On the other hand
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, students are entitled to join admission test in the
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year of preliminary school and high school to enrol the high school and university respectively. In fact, those admission tests only cover math and literature questions, and due to that reason, most of the parents direct their children to study math
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of
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courses.
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some of the students are willing to be an artist, the education system does not allow them to realize their dream come true.
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, some of the famous directors have not been studied in
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schools,
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schools, instead
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, they have studied engineering or medicine.
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, Nuri Bilge Ceylan, the best director in Turkey, studied electronic engineering, started the movie as a hobby and he recorded his
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film when he was at 32 years old. In conclusion, in light of the information given above,
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there are so rare examples to prove that spending
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on
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is a loss of
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, I am strongly convinced that
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classes are crucial and has great importance for children's educational and professional lives. It should not be forgotten that a life without
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is like a tree without roots.
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  • problem-solving
  • cultural awareness
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