Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.

Only local foods should be provided at supermarkets rather than foods from other countries. We all know that consuming our own goods makes the
country
’s
economy
grow, but what if the
country
does not have enough ingredient for making a healthy meal, kids will not be served healthy meals? In my opinion, I think that every supermarket should provide a variety of ingredients and
food
. Nowadays, there are many countries that cannot plant the vegetations, due to drought or unfavourable environment,
therefore
teenagers in those countries will have a lack of vitamins and other minerals.
This
situation is the most terrible thing that can happen all over the world, because children are
one
hundred percent of our future, if they do not enough minerals or proteins, these kids can easily get the disease.
For instance
, youth in some part of the world is starving because their president does not believe that import
food
from other countries is significant, so they will be having only
food
that can produce in their environment,
such
as in some islands they eat Sadeen Fish every day, and
that is
horrific.
On the other hand
, in case of supermarket only provide local products, producers in that
country
will not be unemployed because they are the biggest and the only
one
who can deliver
food
,
thus
the
economy
will never fall as long as there is no problem with producer,
however
if all sources are not able to be reaped, due to disasters, the whole
country
is going to run out of
food
. To illustrate, there is a small
country
surrounding with forests, they hunt and harvest from the forests for their
food
, the
economy
is growing and keeps growing, unfortunately,
one
day in the forests are burnt by a fire disaster and take weeks to recover them, will they survive without
food
for the rest of the week? To conclude, if supermarkets sell only local
food
, no
o
ne can
Accept comma addition
no, one
not guarantee that if there are enough nutrients for those local people or not,
in contrast
the
economy
will certainly raise.
Finally
, I my point of view I think it is the best to provide a variety of
food
from all over the world in the supermarket.

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