Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, countries are developing
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by
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and that developments are compelling people to
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more to other states and it is useful for countries
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and
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which is collected from
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could use in medical and educational ways. I believe that
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has more benefits than drawbacks.
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essay will look at some aspects to justify my viewpoint. To start with, a number of tourists increased in many modern and historical countries after beginning technological century due to we can see that many countries reached a peak in development and it might cause to increase a
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the country
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whereas could impact negatively for their citizens' health. A corona virus can be a prime example, there was a high demand in Russian citizens that going to the Italy
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month due to there was a discount for some things
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as tickets and hotel prices decreased significantly
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then
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most some Russians preferred going there
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their some parts approximately 15% or 13 % came back to the Russian with a corona virus.Another drawback of
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is that traditional customs might be lost due to tourists.Some local people stated that their traditional cultures are not suitable to the modern era, whereas cultures brought from tourists is more suitable and modern.
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they try to learn another
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's custom or their style of dresses
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they will forget their tradition
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local traditions might be lost step by step.
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, opponents of
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view point out that
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could increase a
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's
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significantly because every tourist spends approximately from 500 dollars to more than 5000 dollars in his or her
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point. A
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money which
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money, which
collected through
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could boost a
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's educational system and development.
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, America is the best region to
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in the world and every
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more than a million people come there for
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. We can see that USA earns a much
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via
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each
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. It is crystal clear that American's university and medicine system are the best worldwide because USA spends more
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money which
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money, which
collected through
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to these types of systems. In conclusion,
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has more benefits than drawbacks,
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, if countries give a more choice to come tourist. It will be more beneficial for their
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