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Many museums charge admission fee while others are fee. Do the advantages of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantages

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Charging for a
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 is becoming a trend as well as a necessity nowadays. Some people believe that taking a charge as an admission to the museum is much more effective rather than giving free access to the visitors.
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 essay will discuss both sides of the aspects and provide reasons why it is much more effective to charge a
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. There are a number of significant benefits to charge entrance
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. The main aim is to provide a better
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. Many museums don't have enough funds to provide a
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 so that they take fees for that. Another point is that it is necessary to maintain their artefacts on regular intervals which requires professionals. It is impossible to hire those professional without proper funds. In India, most of the museums which take an admission
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 for visitors have a number of visitors than having free access to it. Looking at the other side, there are many drawbacks, too.
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 and poor people don't have enough funds which can encourage them to visit the museums which may lead to decrease the number of tourists.
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, it deters the people to enter to the museum. It might be possible if museums do not get proper funds,
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, it gets closed as they do not have any funds to run them. In conclusion,
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 essay discussed the advantages and disadvantages of charging
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an admission fee
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 to the museum. In my opinion, the advantages of taking
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an insurance fee
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 outweigh the disadvantages because of better
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 and value of the money.

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