The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The process diagram depicts the stages of recycling

of

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aluminium

cans

. As an

overall

assessment,

it is clear that

the

cans

collection is a main

stagestage

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stage stage

, whilst

the

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recycling is the

last

stage

of the process. Now turning to the details, in the initial

stage

, used

cans

are collected from a dumpster, and with the help of a collection truck recycled materials

transported

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to the cleaning and sorting process.

Then

after

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, all materials are segregated in

cleaning

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and compressing machine

on

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in

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a particular place, in the following

stage

processed

cans

are heated and melted in Melting Machine,

it

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forms a liquid which is an important

stagestage

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stage stage

of recycling.

In addition

to

this

, the liquid is converted into

a

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aluminium sheet in a size of 2.5mm and

the

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a

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thickness of 6mm in

rolling

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the rolling

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stage

. In the subsequent

stage

, recycled

cans

are prepared from aluminium

sheet

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sheets

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, and in the final

stage

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a beverage company in the UK used almost 75% of recycled

cans

for their soft drink.