In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people in prison. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Day by day, the rate of

crime

in the world is increasing rapidly. Some people believe that the most effective methods for reducing

crime

are the

police

force and jails.

However

, others think that the best way to fight rising levels of

crime

is to address the underlying factors

such

as poor education and poverty. A new study by the NSW Bureau of

Crime

Statistics and Research (BOCSAR) has found that increasing

police

numbers can reduce

crime

. For

this

reason, I strongly disagree as I believe by having more

police

on the

street

and putting more people

into

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in

prison

undeniably will reduce the

number

of

crime

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crimes

.

Firstly

, criminals will not be so aggressive in committing

crime

as the

police

is everywhere to directly tackle the

crime

. Criminals scared to commit the

crime especially

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crime, especially

when the

police

are around as they cannot commit the

crime

easily.

Police

will always patrol around the area so, the

number

of

crime

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crimes

will decrease.

For example

, by locating every

street

with at least one

police

in residential area, it

definitely make

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definitely makes

has definitely made

the criminals feel unsafe to do the

crime

which means they are not going to do the

crime

freely.

Thus

, by having more

police

, it

definitely reduce

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definitely reduces

has definitely reduced

the

crime

as the criminals are not free to do so. On top of that, additional

police

can arrest more

offenders leading

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offenders, leading

to

incapacitation

or

cessation

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the cessation

of offending among targeted offenders. The reason why the

crime

out there is increasing is because we cannot arrest the main culprit of the

crime

and the criminals normally is in multiple. So,

this

additional

police

can help to arrest all the criminals at one time without letting the other criminals get away.

For instance

, the robbery

in

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on

the

street

which the felon can easily run away from anybody as there are many streets around. If there is an adequate

number

of

police

, surely, the criminal will be arrested.

Therefore

, it is worth to have more

police

on the

street

rather than attack the cause of the

crime

to solve the numbers of

crime

.

Besides

that, punishment like putting the criminals in the

prison

will make them think twice before committing the

crime

. Living in the

prison

is not same as living out there where you are free to go anywhere, to eat anything and to do whatever you like to do as long as it will not

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bother

other people.

Prison

can be compared as living in a hell where everything is limited. Normally you need to spend more than a year in the

prison

. Your life will be wasted in

prison

. In the case of the misdemeanour which includes a fine of no more than $1,000 and a sentence of imprisonment of no more than 12 months, the theft

offense

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offence

has to bear

such

cost and waste his time in the

prison

. So, it is important to just put the offender in the

prison

to reduce the

number

of

crime

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crimes

. In a nutshell, I think we need to be hard on criminals. There are

also

sinner coming from rich people committing to

such

crimes like not paying taxes.

Hence

, I do not think we can successfully reduce

crime

only by focusing on the causes of

crime

.