These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways on which this trent could be reversed.

While
country
towns were once vibrant and growing places, these da
ys many a
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days, many
ppear to be dying as people move to the city in search of work and excitement. In
this
essay. i
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
ntend to discuss the impact of
this
problem as well as how more people could be encouraged to live in the rural areas. Su
prisingly,
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Surprisingly
the most serious consequences of rural depopulation are often felt in urban areas.
As a result
of overcrowding, cities throughout the world today are increasing prone to en
vironment p
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environmental
roblems like air, water and noise pollution. Beijing is a particularly good example of
this
.
Further
, the uncontrolled growth of cities
also
gives rise to social problems
such
as high unemployment, crime and in less af
luent c
having an abundant supply of money or possessions of value
affluent
ountries, the creation of slums. Clearly, there is a limit to how many people can live in one area are before living st
andars a
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standards
standard
re negatively influenced. In order to stem the tide of rural depopulation, i
b
refers to the speaker or writer
I
elieve we must
first
address its root causes. At the heart of the matter is the disparity between services and fa
cilitites i
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
n the
country
and those in the city. I firmly believe that urban and rural dwellers alike would find the idea of
country
life far more appealing if high quality shopping centres, cinemas, swimming pools, restaurants, libraries, schools and hospitals were more readily available in the
country
. One
further
method of attracting people to the
country
would be for government to provide financial incentives to business and professional workers who willingly relocate to rural areas. In reality,
this
problem is unlikely to be resolved in the short term.
However
, it is by no means insurmountable, and i
a
refers to the speaker or writer
I
m convinced that more people will choose the
country
as city life becomes less comfortable and more expensive.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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