Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

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It is certainly true that online courses are becoming

common feature

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a common feature

of almost

university

education

. In my viewpoint, it could be a

best

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good

better

choice for people who want to learn everywhere and every time.

Although

there are some

draw-backs

the quality of being a hindrance

drawbacks

drawback's

drawbacks'

this

type of

course

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I argue that there are far more benefits than.The main defect is that the Internet-based learning is not available for students in difficult condition. In spite of these disadvantages,

refers to the speaker or writer

think that the online

university

course

is one of the best ways to improve

education

quality and professional skills for various

reason

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reasons

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the one hand, It is convenient and reasonable for learners in distant places.

For instance

, students in the countryside or somewhere far from their

university

, they can save their time and money for moving to face-to- face classes, by joining an online-

course

. For another example,

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education, equality

is effected by COVID-19

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everybody must be in

quarantine

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Quarantine

by staying at home

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so Ministry of

education

applied

this

type of learning in

education system

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the education system

. Another great benefit of E-learning is that it allows us to watch the lessons many times and you can choose any courses or any teachers you like.

Secondly

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the cost of a

university

education

can be greatly reduced,

similarly

the number of students will increase

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Last

but not least, the Internet-based learning offers open access to anyone who is willing to study regardless of their ages, locations, abilities and their backgrounds. In case, a married lady with two children will still be capable of completing some academic

course

to enlarge her professional skill and awareness. In conclusion, I recognize the advantages that it brings. Online

university

course

is a positive development

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays many mothers take care of the family and don’t go out to work. Some people believe they should be given salaries by the government. 🔸Do you agree or disagree?

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